Thursday, April 29, 2004
This is my son Maddy's first book. It was an assignment for kindergarten, I was skeptical that a 6 year old could write a book, but he did this entirely on his own, and I am so proud of what he did! He typed a lot of it himself too!
THE ROBOT EAGLE OF DEATH by Madison Halland
ALONG TIME AGO DEEP IN THE FOREST THERE WAS A MSYTEROUS FORCE.
MANY PEOPLE THOUGHT THERE WERE NORMAL EAGLES AROUND BUT NO
THERE WASN’T THERE WAS A ROBOT EAGLE MANY SCIENTIST HAD DREAMS OF THE ROBOT EAGLE. AND THE ROBOT EAGLE WAS REAL,
THEN ONE NIGHT LITTLE JOHN SAW IN AN ELECTRIC FEATHER. HE PICK UP THE FEATHER.
CHAPTER 2
HE SWOOPED DOWN AND GRABED JOHN. LITTLE JOHN SAID “HELP!!! HELP!! PUT ME DOWN!” THE GIANT BIRD SAID “NO”.
CHAPTER 3THE EAGLE COULDENT TALK AND THE BEAST PUT HIM DOWN AND THEN HE USED HIS SWORD WING TO STOP HIM TO PIEACES THE GREAT BEAST FLEW UP THEN RASED HIS SWORD WING AND FLEW DOWN AND CHOPPED BUT IT DIDN’T WORK HE DID’NT KNOW THAT LITTLE JOHN WASN’T REALLY LITTLE THEY HAD A SWORD FIGHT
CHAPTER 4
THEN FINALLY LITTLE JOHN TURND IN TO A BIG JOHN THEN THE GREAT BEAST FLEW AWAY BECAUSES THE BEAST DIDN’T KNOW THAT LITTLE JOHN HAD A FORCE IN SIDE HIM. AND LITTLE JOHN DID’T KNOW
THAT THE EAGLE HAD THE MOST MILENIUM ITEM IN THE PLANT.
CHAPTER 5
THEN THE GREAT BEAST CAME BACK HE WAS STILL ANGERY AT LITTLE JOHN HIS SWORD WING TURNED INTO A NORMAL WING THEN THE GREAT BEAST HAD HIS FIRST CHANCE TO USE HIS CLAW WING AND THEN THE GREAT BEAST FLEW AND SHOCKED LITTLE JOHN AND THAT WAS VERY VERY VERY LONG SHOCK AND HE WAS THINKING TO
USE HIS CLAW FIRST A THUNDER LINE WENT DOWN HIS CLAW THEN HE PUT HIS CLAW ON LITTLE JOHN THEN HE WENT CRAZY! THE EAGLE PLANED TO KILL LITTLE JOHN THERE WAS ONE PROBLEM THE EAGLE’S LINE WENT UP AND IT DIDN’T SHOCK ANY MORE. And THEN Little John stopped going crazy. And then the eagle was going crazy.
Chapter 7
The terrifying beast
The eagle flew away to a mysterious jungle and then he spread his wings, he ran away from the mysterious glare. He could see it, he could feel it. A gorilla tackled him and then threw him on the ground. The great beast had shock him to stop him so he would not wrestle him any more. The shock didn’t hurt the gorilla, but the sword wing will.
The great beast realized that being bad isn’t all there is to being an eagle. So the great beast turned into good and stopped wrestling the gorilla. Then the Eagle said it’s what counts to be a good eagle and bring justice.
The End
THE ROBOT EAGLE OF DEATH by Madison Halland
ALONG TIME AGO DEEP IN THE FOREST THERE WAS A MSYTEROUS FORCE.
MANY PEOPLE THOUGHT THERE WERE NORMAL EAGLES AROUND BUT NO
THERE WASN’T THERE WAS A ROBOT EAGLE MANY SCIENTIST HAD DREAMS OF THE ROBOT EAGLE. AND THE ROBOT EAGLE WAS REAL,
THEN ONE NIGHT LITTLE JOHN SAW IN AN ELECTRIC FEATHER. HE PICK UP THE FEATHER.
CHAPTER 2
HE SWOOPED DOWN AND GRABED JOHN. LITTLE JOHN SAID “HELP!!! HELP!! PUT ME DOWN!” THE GIANT BIRD SAID “NO”.
CHAPTER 3THE EAGLE COULDENT TALK AND THE BEAST PUT HIM DOWN AND THEN HE USED HIS SWORD WING TO STOP HIM TO PIEACES THE GREAT BEAST FLEW UP THEN RASED HIS SWORD WING AND FLEW DOWN AND CHOPPED BUT IT DIDN’T WORK HE DID’NT KNOW THAT LITTLE JOHN WASN’T REALLY LITTLE THEY HAD A SWORD FIGHT
CHAPTER 4
THEN FINALLY LITTLE JOHN TURND IN TO A BIG JOHN THEN THE GREAT BEAST FLEW AWAY BECAUSES THE BEAST DIDN’T KNOW THAT LITTLE JOHN HAD A FORCE IN SIDE HIM. AND LITTLE JOHN DID’T KNOW
THAT THE EAGLE HAD THE MOST MILENIUM ITEM IN THE PLANT.
CHAPTER 5
THEN THE GREAT BEAST CAME BACK HE WAS STILL ANGERY AT LITTLE JOHN HIS SWORD WING TURNED INTO A NORMAL WING THEN THE GREAT BEAST HAD HIS FIRST CHANCE TO USE HIS CLAW WING AND THEN THE GREAT BEAST FLEW AND SHOCKED LITTLE JOHN AND THAT WAS VERY VERY VERY LONG SHOCK AND HE WAS THINKING TO
USE HIS CLAW FIRST A THUNDER LINE WENT DOWN HIS CLAW THEN HE PUT HIS CLAW ON LITTLE JOHN THEN HE WENT CRAZY! THE EAGLE PLANED TO KILL LITTLE JOHN THERE WAS ONE PROBLEM THE EAGLE’S LINE WENT UP AND IT DIDN’T SHOCK ANY MORE. And THEN Little John stopped going crazy. And then the eagle was going crazy.
Chapter 7
The terrifying beast
The eagle flew away to a mysterious jungle and then he spread his wings, he ran away from the mysterious glare. He could see it, he could feel it. A gorilla tackled him and then threw him on the ground. The great beast had shock him to stop him so he would not wrestle him any more. The shock didn’t hurt the gorilla, but the sword wing will.
The great beast realized that being bad isn’t all there is to being an eagle. So the great beast turned into good and stopped wrestling the gorilla. Then the Eagle said it’s what counts to be a good eagle and bring justice.
The End
Wednesday, April 28, 2004
Maddy, my six year old with cp, went to the Doctor the other day, not for himself but for my husband. The Doctor was making small talk with him, trying to be nice to him and after Maddy had answered all the questions that he wanted to, he put his fist to his chest, tapped it, made a peace sign and said "Peace, I'm outta here"
